CBR Live! Archive
Idol Thoughts 10/14
- by Brian Cronin
- in Idol Thoughts
Sunday, October 14th, 2007 at 9:03 PM EST
Updated: Sunday, October 14th, 2007 at 9:03 PM EST
The pages are coming in!
As a treat for being the very FIRST entrant to deliver his pages, I figured I’d show you folks Nick Pitarra’s entry for Round 1.
Enjoy!
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Page 2
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Page 3
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Be sure to check out all the entrants!!
2 Comments
Rodrigo
October 15, 2007 at 5:40 am
Nice Pages!!! very detailed… I just didn’t like the explosion… Sometimes the excess in detail just makes things a little confusing to follow…
Deric
October 15, 2007 at 6:01 am
First impressions: a generally nice style, but a bit too cluttered. The detail is impressive, but it gets in the way of the storytelling.
I think the unfortunate side is that many script directions were missed–from the all cap ‘No Nudity’ in the establishing shot, to small details like the POV of various panels and missing elements (the car, for instance).
Again, nice, but very busy.